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Anyways y'all:giggle:this piece was inspired by my an amazing friend:iconsorcerushorserus:I had to include a few characters from her awesome comic :icongildaplz:Dash Academy:iconawesomedashplz:Just an FYI this artwork:gallery:was created quite some time ago^^; I just uploaded the "newer edition" on here:idea:because it was deleted from my previous account:shrug:




Mediums: Promarker and Prismacolour markers with pencil crayons for foreground/background, Adobe Photoshop editing
Duration: +30 hours



Rainbow Dash, Derpy, Fluttershy, Firefly, Surprise and other ponies My Little Pony:iconfyre-flye:
Piccy :iconaurora-chiaro:
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:iconzsparkonequus:
I don't know your exact reasons, but I could tell why you put this on your scrapbook, it is certainly less detailed than other artworks of yours.

But first I will tell you what I liked from this piece. First, the cheer here is absolutely amazing and well portrayed, that's something you know how to do, to transmit an emotion trough an image. I like how Derpy is one of the only two ponies with opened eyes.
The background is simplistic but it doesn't needs to be to complex to look good (It looks good!)

I really like the shading and lightnings, they add a lot of spirit to the image, and is totally goodly placed.

The minor problems that I have with this piece are on the anatomy, I guess it is slightly incorrect because this is an old artwork so, instead of just saying that there are problems, let's see what the problems are.

The front legs of Rainbow Dash are a bit too short and they don't follow the principle of the show of starting the leg thinner in the elbow and then thicker in the knee and cannon and even wider in the heel (Although is the exact opposite in real life), here Rainbow's front legs are of the same wide from start to finish. The same happened with the front right leg of Firefly and the orange pony's both front legs and Derpy's Front left leg looks a bit short.

I don't see any problems with the back legs, the gaskins and hooks are well placed, at first I was going to point out that Rainbow's points of hips and stifles were a bit big and/or odd but I realized they weren't and it was just matter of the perspective that is used here.
I recommend you to take the drawings as if they almost were real horses with real anatomy, see how the legs and the body in general works and bends and based on that, you can start to play with poses that look natural on their anatomy but also look like a cartoon, not that you don't do it right already, just a tip to improve, improvement is always good, no matter how good you are.

All in all this is a very good, cheerful, colorful and full of good vibes deviation and of course the little oddities that I might find don't take it's essence away. You don't have to edit it and you don't have feel let down for making a tinny "mistake", you only have to have the critique and recommendations in mind so you make it better next time, rest assured that you will do it better.
Best of wishes on future pieces.

Your friend,
~Spark
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, haha, I actually remember this one from way back on your old account! And the re-upload from last year. :D I've actually never seen Winter Wrap Up funnily enough...^^;

Ah well, it's still a cute artwork, and I do always love cruising your gallery, though I've seen it many times. :giggle: I just adore your works that much ;)

It's been a tiring day for me, lots of chores all day and computer work...so boring! :noes: I hope you've been okay this evening dear? I hope so! :aww:

Cute arts as per usual, even though its old ;p and lots of hugs your way sweet friend!! :tighthug: You rock! :heart:
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
I've been doing alright :D you know me always running around like a chicken without a head:giggle:thank you always for your comments:heart:
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, lol, but chickens are cute at least, just like you, lol. :giggle: And of course, you're always welcome for the comments, I love commenting on your works my dear! Thank you for always taking the time tov reply to me too, I always love hearing from you. 

Never stop being fabulous Manda! :giggle::heart:
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh anytime and you too Daniel, keep being awesome :D
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, I hope well have more time to talk in a bit, with endearing terms and what not. :giggle:

Hugs as always! :heart:
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Jose-Ramiro Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, very nice pic.
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Unnop64 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice art! I like it.
by the way on Fluttershy mane on her head, it just looks weird to me. It could be similar on Surprise where her main start from the middle to half ear.
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BerryPAWNCH Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
My favorite pose here is Rainbow Dash's "WE DID IT" cheer. :3
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Mega-Gojira Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They look so cheerful!
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GamerPikachu Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IT'S BEAUTIFUL!!!!
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cupcakes235 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
can someone do a pony for me that has a cupcake for its cutie mark:happybounce:
pleaseLa la la la 
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drawingteen777 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Filmographer
sure ill post it later cupcake235
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cupcakes235 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
thx
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J3susFreak Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do I see the element of... SURPRISE?! Shock Emote 
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ZoPteryx Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job!  The slight blur effect in the corners really make the characters stand out. :) (Smile) 
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Mango-Dolphin Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh magic!
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SKpip Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awesome! This looks like the freeze-frame at the end of a cartoon where all the characters high-five. Nice job! I think I read part of this comic a long time ago, it was pretty good. 
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh thank you :D I'm so glad you likes:heart:
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SuperMarioMaster170 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If only Spyro and the Dragon Skylanders were there too!
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SkyHeavens Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohh I remember this piece~! :la: Still a good one! :D
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SailorPhantom Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE the colors. :D So bright and happy. ^_^
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nilaycan Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
is that firefly
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WheelJackson Featured By Owner May 12, 2014   General Artist
Yay! :D
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batosan Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice!
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mistypine01 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Still one of your best earlier art, AC.
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caballero-nocturno Featured By Owner May 12, 2014
beautifl! :D
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MorphiusX Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Winter Wrap Up, Winter Wrap Up! C'mon Doctor, have no fear, 'cuz tomorrow, Spring is here!
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MasterVule Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks really awesome! I really like the colors! :D
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Emeowrald Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
Pegasi! Lots and Lots of Pegasi! 
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HungrySohma16 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Looks amazing! x3
Nice dynamic shot! :3
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Envirotech Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Quite colourful!  Very nice work ^_^
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Mega-Gojira Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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UltimateView Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you did it again Mandy!
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SorcerusHorserus Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Yay I remember this! It's as adorable as ever. I really love the warm background colors; they make it feel so cheerful and happy. Gotta love all the background ponies too! I know it's an older piece, but all the posed full-body ponies are still really excellent! Keep up the awesome, Aurora! :iconpinkiepiesmileplz:
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much:hug:you are the absolute best:heart:
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BelleMaske Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, the colors are so vibrant in your work!
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very cool!
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DestinyDecade Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Truly is a wrap indeed. Lovely.
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PinkieTane Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Firefly, Surprise, what are you doing here? Get back to your own generation cx
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw, I do remember this piece! You've done a long way since then, though its still a very cute piece, doll. I like how vibrant and colorful it is, it is very pleasing to look at. :giggle: I always love seeing your works regardless of how old they! :love: Well done again doll! :heart:
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much:heart:it's always a pleasure:hug:
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope so doll...it's the least I can do to try and make up for all the yuckiness past few days. ^^; Can we keep a conversation going here? You mentioned I sent you lots of replies, and it might help if we can limit conversations to one place? Is that okay love, I have some more stuff is like to ask, lol. :iconfluttershyisshyplz:
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh of course, if you want to stick to it on here then of course :) it'll make it a lot easier for both of us:heart:
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok, anything I can do to keep from overwhelming you. ;p This is probably a silly question I've asked before, but I Thats something you've probably noticed, I ask the same questions a lot. Despite our minor..I don't want to say argument because it really wasn't one, but you know. ;) Despite that, you will still call me by affectionate terms like dear or doll right? I know it's silly to ask, especially since I've asked already, but I just am a bit worried about you being upset at me, and you won't want to anymore because I hurt your feelings. :( You still will every so often right dearest? :love: I know, it's silly to ask about something like that, I just really enjoy it when my friends and you do that, it makes me feel loved and cared about. :iconhappywoonaplz:
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yah of course I do ^^ I usually will say affectionate or endearing terms, when I'm in a good mood myself ;p that's when I usually do say those things, it may not be as often as you do. But to some extend I do hun :)
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, I know it's not as often as you. In fact, I bet ya I call you affectionate names more than your boyfriend does, lol. :giggle: I really do enjoy hearing you call me stuff like that, reminds me of home. :love: Like I've said I'm a Southern boy and everybody says stuff like hun and sweetie all the time. ;p Also everybody says "Y'all" all the time. XD Im an anomaly in that regard, don't say y'all much. I live in "redneck country" actually. ;) But I digress, I do love hearing those things from people, it always does make me feel loved, especially when you do it, doll. :blush: Also, I had another random thing to add. Since I have no electric, I've been playing my DS again, and I've been thinking about getting a 3DS. :idea: They're not terribly expensive, and since they announced that they're doing remakes of Ruby and Sapphire on 3DS (playing like X/Y) I think I might have a reason to really get back into Pokemon. :eager: What do you think my dear, think I should? I know you have a 3DS. :clap: We might be able to play together! :tighthug:
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Aurora-Chiaro Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh I see what you are saying, that's why you are so used to hearing those terms :)
Really they are doing remakes? I did not know that. I hope it's good ^^; yah of course we might, just haven't played it in awhile. Been making artwork mostly now :D
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Daniel-SG Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, I know it's not as often as you. In fact, I bet ya I call you affectionate names more than your boyfriend does, lol. :giggle: I really do enjoy hearing you call me stuff like that, reminds me of home. :love: Like I've said I'm a Southern boy and everybody says stuff like hun and sweetie all the time. ;p Also everybody says "Y'all" all the time. XD Im an anomaly in that regard, don't say y'all much. I live in "redneck country" actually. ;) But I digress, I do love hearing those things from people, it always does make me feel loved, especially when you do it, doll. :blush: Also, I had another random thing to add. Since I have no electric, I've been playing my DS again, and I've been thinking about getting a 3DS. :idea: They're not terribly expensive, and since they announced that they're doing remakes of Ruby and Sapphire on 3DS (playing like X/Y) I think I might have a reason to really get back into Pokemon. :eager: What do you think my dear, think I should? I know you have a 3DS. :clap: We might be able to play together! :tighthug:
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AleximusPrime Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Daw!  An oldie but a goodie!
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okaboka Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
:iconitsatrapplz: ITS A WRAP!
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